Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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school

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always do

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always, do

not provide enough education to teach about health issues for teenagers. In my opinion, I definitely disagree with that kind of argument because we may not understand about the

school

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's curriculum.

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, there

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some evidence proving teachers

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care for their pupils. To start with the

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clue is there are many social activities held in local areas to spread out the knowledge about protecting health especially for children.

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, annual physical tournaments for children are celebrated

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district, which

contains the main objective sharing people information about healthcare and how to doing exercise. The

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reason which convinced me is children nowadays can understand the importance of doing exercise. Every time I go running in a

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, I always see there are some children doing aerobic exercise or go running with their relatives. Personally, I think

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is quite clear signal of a certain determination about fitness concern.

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, sex-education are now

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becoming

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and foremost section which

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supposes

to be put in the teaching method because

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can help children protect

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the sexual abuse which usually happens nowadays. From my understanding, now every eighth-grade student,

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, have to finish at least two courses of gender quality and sexual relationship. I think these requirements are acceptable so as to provide

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students'

student's

student

conciousness

an alert cognitive state in which you are aware of yourself and your situation

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of gender. In conclusion, I am convinced that

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have been done

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has been done

many works in order to teach

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students

a student

how to be strong and healthy

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as organize social events, encourage student do

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the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercises

and involve sex-education into

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school's curriculum

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the school's curriculum

.

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, schools

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need to think more ways to support healthy awareness for students because these existing methods seem to be not enough for some people.