Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is stated that
school
always do
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always, do
not provide enough education to teach about health issues for teenagers. In my opinion, I definitely disagree with that kind of argument because we may not understand about the
school
's curriculum.
In addition
, there
are
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is
some evidence proving teachers
also
care for their pupils. To start with the
first
clue is there are many social activities held in local areas to spread out the knowledge about protecting health especially for children.
Furthermore
, annual physical tournaments for children are celebrated
on
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in
March in my
district which
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district, which
contains the main objective sharing people information about healthcare and how to doing exercise. The
second
reason which convinced me is children nowadays can understand the importance of doing exercise. Every time I go running in a
part
an organization to gain political power
party
, I always see there are some children doing aerobic exercise or go running with their relatives. Personally, I think
this
is quite clear signal of a certain determination about fitness concern.
Lastly
, sex-education are now
become
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becoming
a
first
and foremost section which
suppose
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supposes
to be put in the teaching method because
this
can help children protect
themselve
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
aganst
in contact with
against
the sexual abuse which usually happens nowadays. From my understanding, now every eighth-grade student,
for example
, have to finish at least two courses of gender quality and sexual relationship. I think these requirements are acceptable so as to provide
students
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students'
student's
student
conciousness
an alert cognitive state in which you are aware of yourself and your situation
consciousness
of gender. In conclusion, I am convinced that
school
have been done
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has been done
many works in order to teach
student
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students
a student
how to be strong and healthy
such
as organize social events, encourage student do
execises
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercises
and involve sex-education into
school's curriculum
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the school's curriculum
.
However
, schools
also
need to think more ways to support healthy awareness for students because these existing methods seem to be not enough for some people.
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