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University lecturers are now able to put their lectures on the internet for students to read and so the importance of attending face to face lectures has been reduced. Do you believe the use of the internet in formal education is a good idea? What future effects will the internet have on academic study?

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Nowadays it has become common among lecturers to use technology and teach the students via
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internet
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the internet
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, there is no need for physical attendance in
university
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. I consider
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 way far effective rather than traditional way it used to be. A good reason for remote learning is being time saving. Going to
university
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 is a time consuming and tiresome routine while students can learn in their room by net and students will use the saved time for doing the assignments or recreational activities.
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, a recent research which has been done by an IT lecturer of
university
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 of Manitoba in 2018 showed that, around 80% of the students felt bore as they do not come to educational institution cause classes had been done in their room.
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, loads of materials,
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 as books, articles, films and so on, are shown which is not possible in the classroom.
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 lecturer and students have access to wider sources when they are in the class. After that, Concerning about the future of academic study,
internet
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 will take the control of everything and students see themselves needless to attend in
university
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.
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Internet
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The internet
 has built a great network for everything one needs to know whether you want a certificate or not.
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, the need for a physical place to learn things will be eliminated,
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, the big universities will stay to gather elites together. In conclusion, I agree with the idea of using technology and
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 in education while it gives a plethora of information to students and they can learn virtually wherever they are. The future is more
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 based rather than attending in a physical classroom environment.
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