many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Due to globalization and advancement in technology the world has become a modern place. In
this
contemporary era,
profuse number
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a profuse number
the profuse number
of people tend to think that social networking websites have adverse effects on both individuals and community. I completely agree with
this
statement and
this
essay will support
this
viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
First
and foremost reason is that
instead
of taking initiatives and making clear window of opportunities for the future, more people waste their
time
on these sites.
For instance
, people invest huge window of
time
in wandering aimlessly on websites
instead
of which they can hone their skills
on
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in
various fields.
Furthermore
, some conglomerate or small companies seduce people to spend most of the
time
on these sites with some deceptive and useless advertisements, games and in different ways. The
last
but not the least reason is that
populace
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the populace
of the world
become
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becomes
addicted to these sites. It causes concentration issues, inattention psychological and health problems.
Moreover
, they
endeavor
a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavour
to do all their works online
such
as shopping, job seeking and others,
as a
result it
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result, it
brings about inactivity and
sedentary lifestyle
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a sedentary lifestyle
to people. These problems are generated because the lack of prioritizing ability and
time
management. To recapitulate, the obvious conclusion to be drawn is that
this
enhancement in technology resulted in generating more websites and it detriments civilization. People should realize that
time
takes an intrinsic part
in
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of
our lifestyle and plays a navigational role which assists us to move forward
to
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in
the right direction in the future.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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