The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
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The chart shows
average
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the average
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distances that people in England travelled using different forms of
transport
in the years 1985 and 2000.
It is clear that
the total number of
miles
travelled by English people using all modes of
transport
increased significantly between 1985 and 2000. The car was by far the most used form of
transport
in both years. In 1985, the average person travelled 3,199
miles
by car, and
this
rose to 4,806
miles
in the year 2000. The figures for
miles
travelled by train,
long distance
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bus, taxi and other modes
also
increased from 1985 to 2000. Travel by taxi saw the most significant change, with more than a threefold increase from 13
miles
per person per year in 1985 to 42
miles
in 2000. There was a fall in the average distances for three forms of
transport
, namely walking, bicycle and local bus. In 1985, English people walked an average of 255
miles
, but
this
figure fell by 18
miles
in 2000. Bicycle use fell from 51 to 41
miles
over the period shown,
while
the biggest downward change was in the use of local buses, with average
miles
per person falling from 429 to 274 over the 15-year period.
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