🔶Some people suggest that bringing up children by the whole family including uncles, aunts and grandparents is better, rather than only by parents. 🔸Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples.

Some people subscribe to the view that it is more beneficial to nurture children while the whole extended family members are there to play a part,

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, I take issue with

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claim for several reasons, the most important of which are children's various personality disorders and the fact that parents become irresponsible. A vitally important aspect of growing up in

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families is becoming dependent in adulthood. Having so many people around all the

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, these children would not get a chance to deal with life challenges by themselves so

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, being independent seems like a nightmare to them and

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inevitably leads to problems

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as inability to live by themselves. Because there always has been

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a human being

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to serve their needs, they could not acquire important life skills

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as cooking, grocery and food shopping, budgeting and spending quality

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with themselves which

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with themselves, which

makes them incapable of living alone.

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, they are more likely to have issues when they get married because it is difficult for them to live apart from their relatives, who have always satisfied their needs without any conditions, and compromising with their spouses and adjusting themselves with new situations seems too exhausting for them.

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, in order to be ready to live in

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chaotic world, it is a must to be nurtured in a nuclear family, which is an appropriate environment to be independent in the future. Taking care of children must be

parent's main responsibility

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the parent's main responsibility

. Having people around all the

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to shoulder

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responsibility, some parents may deny it and be involved in other less important activities like working too much and meeting friends more than enough while their toddlers are being watched by grandparents or aunts who are not able to establish a strong emotional bond, which a child requires.

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, if someone

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multiple trainers in his life path, he would be distracted easily when thorny problems arise because he cannot trust his parents, who were not there for him when he was growing up. After

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consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

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, it is obvious that bringing up a child in an extended family might make parents fail in their parenting duties which makes them useless eventually. To conclude, I strongly believe that bringing up children should not be interfered

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any of family members and it is only parent's duties. The reason for

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the possibility of having personality issues is more for the people who have raised with multiple trainers and there are lots of skills that they lack of because of being surrounded by many people who meet their needs.

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the parent's part

may vanish in nurturing their child over

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for making other family members in charge. The number of two-parent families has been growing in today's society and living in an extended family will probably be a rare phenomenon in the near future.