some people say that wa can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Ohers say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema
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cinema
is often associated with a perfect family Use synonyms
time
, a romantic date, and an enjoyable experience. Yet, Use synonyms
people
nowadays are taking advantage of technology by installing Use synonyms
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at Homes or enjoying watching Fix the agreement mistake
auto-projectors
movies
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in
small screens of phones, tablets, or Personal computers. These Change preposition
on
people
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,
think that going to the Remove the comma
apply
cinema
is overrated and a waste of Use synonyms
time
. I, Use synonyms
on the other
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hand
think that enjoying a great Add the comma(s)
hand,
movie
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cinema
is a priceless experience. Add an article
a cinema
the cinema
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in technology Fix the agreement mistake
Advancements
had
made our lives easier, and it is Given that we should take advantage of it. Nowadays, Wrong verb form
have
people
have no Use synonyms
time
to scheduleUse synonyms
gathering
or dates in the Fix the agreement mistake
gatherings
cinema
. It Requires Use synonyms
to abide
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abiding
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movie
starting Change noun form
movie's
time
, which will not be possible for all the Use synonyms
people
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also
demands money for transportation, Linking Words
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movie
and snacks. So most Fix the agreement mistake
movies
people
would say: "Use synonyms
why
not set a cosy atmosphere at Capitalize word
Why
home
and enjoy a Use synonyms
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home made
meal Correct your spelling
homemade
while
watching a Linking Words
movie
using screen projectors". Use synonyms
Furthermore
, It is too much for other Linking Words
people
to go out and take the risk of going to the Use synonyms
movie
theatre and finding that the seats are full. Eventually, they decide to stay Use synonyms
home
and just enjoy the films on Use synonyms
the
phones or tablets at no expense. In Change the word
their
contracts
to modern Correct your spelling
contrast
people
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cinema
to enjoy the Use synonyms
movie
and get into the mood without distraction. Use synonyms
For example
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first
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cinema
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first
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dates
. Admittedly, some younger Fix the agreement mistake
date
people
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movies
at a Use synonyms
cinema
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cinema
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Movies
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people
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movie
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movies
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come
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I
choose
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chose
first
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time
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cinema
. Correct article usage
the cinema
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I
first
release. Use synonyms
moreover
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movie
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it
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apply
home
. Use synonyms
To conclude
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movie
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inconvenient
in some circumstances. But the thrill of watching it in a Add a missing verb
is inconvenient
cinema
is much better and Use synonyms
worth
.Correct pronoun usage
worth it
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion