A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not manage correctly. Describe the merits and demerits of tourism in the world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh it's drawbacks.

In

past few decades

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the past few decades

,

tourism

has contributed significantly to economic

development especially

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development, especially

in lower- middle income countries.

Although

there are

lot

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lots

of

advantages like

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advantages, like

positive cultural exchange and exposure to

latest technology

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the latest technology

latest technologies

by having

tourism

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toured

as one of the main source of income, there are

also

disadvantages that cannot be ignored.

However

, in my opinion the advantages of including

tourism

as one of the major

source

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sources

of income outweighs the disadvantages that can easily be corrected.

Tourism

is a boon to any

country

which look forward for

a

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an

economic development.

This

not only brings in

lot

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a lot

lots

of foreign money, but

also

introduces the

localites

a surrounding or nearby region

localities

to a different culture and norms.

This

cultural exchange clearly contributes to

development

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the development

of open

mindedness

in

attitude

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the attitude

of the population exposed.

Additionally

,

Government

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the Government

will invest more into traditional buildings and cultural aspects in the process of making the

country

more attractive to the tourists.

This

will not only result in increased tourists

flow but

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flow, but

even the local people will get awareness about traditional areas and its significance in the history.

Further more

in addition

Furthermore

, having

more tourist

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a more tourist

will introduce the

country

to more technologies that can be adapted and used locally.

However

, there are

also

few disadvantages

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a few disadvantages

like over crowding and

risk

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the risk

of damage when the tourist flow increases to a particular spot.

For example

the Indian

express

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expresses

published on 22

nd

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July 2019 stated that there were several pencil and pen marks spotted on the walls of Taj Mahal and few tourists were held responsible for the same.

Majority

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The majority

of

such

damages are caused when there is

over crowding

cause to crowd together too much

overcrowding

and lack of proper vigilance.

However

,

such

incidents are rare and undertaking proper precautionary measures can prevent

such

incidences to a large extend. In

conclusion I

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conclusion, I

strongly believe that

tourism

is a boon for economic growth and

therefore

should be promoted as far as possible.

Although

there are few disadvantages, the benefits that a

country

receives as part of

tourism

outweighs the disadvantages. Through

propoer

marked by suitability or rightness or appropriateness

proper

vigilance and certain precautionary measures, the disadvantages can be easily sorted out