You live in a house near a park. Recently, a lot of teenagers have been meeting in the park at night. They are very noisy. Write an email to the local government in about 250 words. Your email should do the following things: • Provide information about where you live. • Explain the problem and how it affects your life. • Suggest a way to solve the problem.

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Dear sir/madam, Hope you doing well. I live in Guildford west near local park. The location is very beautiful and suitable,
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
it is close to my workplace. Recently,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have been
move
Suggestion
moving
at
this
Linking Words
place. Sir, at night time a lot of young people have been meeting in
park
Suggestion
the park
every night. They drink and smoke
togather
Suggestion
to gather
like a gang. They are too loud and always chortled. Because of
this
Linking Words
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
face
problem
Suggestion
the problem, for
the problem for
problem of
problem of of
for
Linking Words
example lack
Accept comma addition
example, lack
of sleeping. I
could'nt
could not
couldn't
sleep properly and when
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
wake up in
morning
Suggestion
the morning
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
feel so tired and
can not
can not
cannot
concentrate on my work.
Secondly
Linking Words
, sometimes they put music and start dancing on weekdays. Kindly, it's my humble request to take an action. You can ask them to do
such
Linking Words
kind of
avtivities
any specific behavior
activities
only on weekends not
everyday
Suggestion
every day
or they can do at their home during normal days. I shall be very thankful to you. Best regards, XYZ

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