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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.(comics,books,radio,TV,film theatre) give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays several
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Nowadays, several
kind
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kinds
 of media's are involved in our daily life as an advantage of technology.
Communication
 is
one
 of the main important part which get a remarkable change in over the year.
there
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There
 are many pros and cons present for all kinds of media's which used for
communication
. In
this
 essay I will discuss three of
most effective ways
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the most effective ways
 of communicating information.
To begin
 with, looking at the advantage of
television
 as effective media for
communication
. We can provide certain information to a large area of people as these present day a large percentage of
population
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the population
 are eagerly watching the
television
. As visual impact is
greatest
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the greatest
 achievement of
television
.
Secondly
, radio is
also
one
 of the most used way of
communication
 as people use radio everywhere.
Moreover it
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Moreover, it
 can carry anywhere they want.
Additionally new
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Additionally, new
 mobile phones
also
 provide FM radio as
this
 is
one
 of the most powerful
communication
agent
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agents
.
every
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Every
 generation can hear and enjoy their interested programme wherever they get time. So we can generate
communication
 to a very vast extend of
world
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the world
.
Subsequently
, by reading books people get enough knowledge, while
play
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playing
 a role as a
media
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medium
 of
communication
. Author can narrate the ideas from his mind into the books, which can
further
 transfer
this facts
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these facts
this fact
 to the readers.
On the other hand
,
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,
these all media's have
drawbacks
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drawbacks, also
also
 as
television
 can be lead generation into some
miscommunication
 by watching certain misleading programs
such
 as crime stories.
Similarly if
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Similarly, if
 the facts
of
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about
author
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the author
 is not good the readers of
book
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the book
also
 can mislead. All things considered, the technology has improved a lot. You need to compare the benefits and drawbacks of all media's like
communication
 is
one
 of the major
benefit
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benefits
. I personally believe the benefit outweigh the drawback.
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