Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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improvement
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the safety on Change preposition
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road
is a debatable topic. Many believe that increasing the age
limit
for issuing the
driving licenses is the best way Correct article usage
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however
, I agree partly and feel that while
increasing the age
limit
will help some
extent Change preposition
to some
and
that alone will not suffice Correct word choice
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While
there are a number of reasons why I feel that increasing age
limit
will be beneficial to some extent, the major argument would be that it restricts the teenager from driving the motored vehicles, which will not only reduce the road
accidents because of their rash driving but also
helps the government in maintain the proper traffic as there will be less bikes and cars on road
. Yet another point, In favour of raising the age
limit
is that mature Add the comma(s)
limit,
people
have better
understanding Correct article usage
a better
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
youngster
it Is obvious thatAdd an article
a youngster
,
understanding with any person comes with Remove the comma
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the
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age
and experiences since these people
Knows
the importance of their life and it is more likely that Change the verb form
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such
people
drive their vehicle safely And also
at the same time they strictly follow the traffic rules and regulations, thus
it decreases the Casualty on road
. In contrast
to the age
limit
, there are many other alternative solutions can
be thought of like the authoritiesCorrect pronoun usage
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Making
people
aware bout the precaution
which one can take Fix the agreement mistake
precautions
while
driving. Presently, it is seen that Many people
are not wearing helmets while
riding motorbikes, though it is compulsory and such
an Activity may result in the
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sever
lane injuries and sometimes Correct your spelling
severe
leads
to spot death. Correct subject-verb agreement
lead
Apart from
this
government can restrict the speed limit
in the cities or in many crowded areas. Since the city is the place Where a person can go for
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the
daily needs, usually by walking Change the word
their
and
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therefore
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such
areas might increase the safety on road
. Correct article usage
the road
To sum up
, though many people
think that by
increasing the Change preposition
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age
limit
may decrease the misdeed onCorrect article usage
the
road
I personally believe that there are many other things such
as spreading awareness and restricting The speed in cities reduces
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to reduces
the
accidents.Correct article usage
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion