Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the safety on

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is a debatable topic. Many believe that increasing the

age

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driving licenses is the best way

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, I agree partly and feel that

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increasing the

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will help

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that alone will not suffice

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there are a number of reasons why I feel that increasing

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will be beneficial to some extent, the major argument would be that it restricts the teenager from driving the motored vehicles, which will not only reduce the

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accidents because of their rash driving but

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helps the government in maintain the proper traffic as there will be less bikes and cars on

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. Yet another point, In favour of raising the

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limit

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is that mature

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understanding

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it Is obvious that

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understanding with any person comes with

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age

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and experiences since these

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the importance of their life and it is more likely that

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people

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drive their vehicle safely And

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at the same time they strictly follow the traffic rules and regulations,

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it decreases the Casualty on

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.

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to the

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, there are many other alternative solutions

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be thought of like the authorities

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people

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aware bout the

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which one can take

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driving. Presently, it is seen that Many

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are not wearing helmets

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riding motorbikes, though it is compulsory and

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an Activity may result in

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sever

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lane injuries and sometimes

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to spot death.

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government can restrict the speed

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in the cities or in many crowded areas. Since the city is the place Where a person can go

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shopping or

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purchase

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daily needs, usually by walking

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therefore

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Limiting the speed in

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areas might increase the safety on

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road

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.

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, though many

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think that

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increasing the

age

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limit

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may decrease the misdeed on

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road

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I personally believe that there are many other things

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as spreading awareness and restricting The speed in cities

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the

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accidents.