some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundation subject whether or not it is used later in life. Discuss both sides

Mathematics is one of the basic
subject
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subjects
which taught at
school
from
begining
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the beginning
beginning
. Some parents thought that
this
subject
is very difficult and should not be taught at
school
while
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
said that it should be a foundation
subject
,
does'nt
does not
doesn't
matter students used
this
later in
life
or not. According to statement both
view
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views
are valid in their own.
First
of all, mathematics is the root of any
subject
in the
filed
catch or pick up (balls) in baseball or cricket
field
of study and practical
life
. It
is related
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relates
to science subjects,
for
example physics
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example, physics
, statistics etc. If we talk
about buisness it
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about business, it
about business it
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participate in games or sport
plays
pays
a vital role in
this
field. Practical
life
is very important as it reflects future. If a person works in a
bank he
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bank, he
should be perfect in maths.
Similarly
, if a person is accountant or charted account in these
fileds
record in a public office or in a court of law
files
fields
fluids
maths plays role of backbone.
Secondly
, it should be taught at
school
from childhood, because a
children
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child
has a blank mind whatever we teach them they will pick so quickly. So when they learn from
strating
a turn to be a starter (in a game at the beginning)
starting
point
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pointing out something
that
they
will pick
this
as fast as a young child. As mentioned above, it is
root
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the root
a root
of any
subject
so no one can deny its value of teaching at
school
.
Thirdly
, other people believe that it should remain the foundation
subject whether
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subject, whether
or not it is used in later
life
. They are correct in their own way. It is not
necessory we
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necessary, we
necessary we
necessarily we
use maths in our practical
life
or
not but
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not, but
it should be a basic element and golden
subject
throughout the education
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background d
. In conclusion, the facts and figures mentioned
above despite
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above, despite
having some drawbacks of mathematics, the benefits of taught at
school
are too great to ignore. Nobody can regret to have a mathematics in their daily
life
and it is the best choice of
subject
to study.
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