Some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy too difficult to learn, so some people argue that those subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays
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the
math
is taught to be able to think critically and rationally in some scientific fields or daily life
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while the
science
of
philosopy
a belief (or system of beliefs) accepted as authoritative by some group or school
philosophy
is existed to assimilate and comprehend the essence of social relationships and organisation.Some argue that it ought to be obligatory to be
aware profoundly
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profoundly aware
of both of
science
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whilst the others claim that it should be optional to choose the philosophy in terms of inquisitiveness which children display in the curricula.I support the concept of those who think that the children should opt based on whether they want that the
philosopy
a belief (or system of beliefs) accepted as authoritative by some group or school
philosophy
philosopher
is taught or not.
To begin
with
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the
math
skills are so crucial which everyone
need
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needs
to meet
this
requirement.
For instance
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while any person is applying for
vacancy
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vacancies
a vacancy
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that person is needed to have enough
math
knowledge
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as it is compulsory in terms of being able to think analytically in order to be in charge of business
productively
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production
.
That is
why to teach the numeracy to children from their early ages plays
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an
essential role in the developing the children's mindset efficiently.So that the teachers should try to do their utmost in order to teach certain formulations of proofs and some concepts in the schools.In
this
way
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initiatively
in an intuitive manner
intuitively
the children can move up the knowledge path by immersing in the
math
from schools to universities or colleges due to curricula related to mathematics. Turning to the
philosopy
a belief (or system of beliefs) accepted as authoritative by some group or school
philosophy
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the children can find so
teduous
so lacking in interest as to cause mental weariness
tedious
to learn it
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as
this
science mainly give
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science, mainly gives
science mainly gives
the information associated with the underlying meanings of
universe
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the universe
.
However
the very young people
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in particular
little ones may be reluctant to possess
these knowledge
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this knowledge
because of being immature still and it can arise exceedingly challenging
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for
them to analyse the truth behind the
complexeties
the quality of being intricate and compounded
complexities
complexity
of human relationships in schools.
This
science
can be learned by those who are willing to seek for every angle of
this
field and enjoy being
absorb
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absorbed
in each pattern of philosophy.
Moreover
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there is not any need to make the
cheildren
a young person of either sex
children
to learn
this
science
as it can
also
be
taughtin
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taught in
high schools
such
as universities or colleges. To conclude
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I believe that if
this
choice of philosophy be optional
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the process of comprehending the curricula may be more effective compared to which is forced to learn that
science
.
However
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it should be
considired
carefully weighed
considered
mandotory
required by rule
mandatory
to have
math
skills from earlier ages.

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