some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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information
about scientific research, business
, and academic world
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believe
information
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importantly
Information
can be shared through many medias
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know
for instance
in business
, and academic sector.
Information
about business
is absolutly
will help businessman and businesswoman whether who have completely and without qualification; used informally as intensifiers
absolutely
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the move fast by using one's feet, with one foot off the ground at any given time
run
business
as well as the beginner. People need to know about the possibilty
of a a future prospect or potential
possibility
possibilities
business
can exist, they need to learn about economy market, how to run it properly, manage empolyees
, making strategies to achieve their goals. For sure beginners will need a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
lost
of a large number or amount
lots
information
to start a business
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has
business
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things, for
for instance
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build
first
operational
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This
is similar to academic sector
. Students and teachers need much Suggestion
the academic sector
information
to get more knowledge
about what they are studying. Students can browse lessons to do their homework that is
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students who want to continue their study to university, need perform in order to get a role
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detailed
information
about the university.It becomes a high priority for them to find as much as they need to know, start from what study proggrame
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which was done in 2013 by a form containing a set of questions; submitted to people to gain statistical information
questionnaire
student
of UGM university, getting to know between how many people thinks that Suggestion
a student
information
is good to share and how many people believes that information
need to be keep
as a secret, the result was very stunning. The fact shows that Suggestion
kept
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people agreed that a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
information
must be spread thoughout
the all the way through
throughout
world
.Especially information
about academic, business
, health, and politics.Their reason was extremely simple, to decrease dumb people in the world
. All people have the same right to get good knowledge
.
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in the world
, good, bad, and secret ones. Therefore we
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information
that we may share to
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information
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