Women are better in child care than men. Therefore, they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. Do you agree with this or not.

Many people opine that women should concentrate on upbringing children

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of working because they are better in

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care than men. I dissent with

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opinion as women should not be forced to nurture their Children only. As a matter of fact, a

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needs affection and caring of

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parents as it is a role of

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man and woman to raise their children;

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, children can be nourished properly.

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, if

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parents of the children will upbringing, their

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while working,

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they will learn gender equality.

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, in current times,

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guardians are working and it is difficult for one parent to take responsibility of a

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,

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,

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female and male must maintain a balance between working and personal life by helping each other.

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, famous personalities couples are usually working, so they

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take care of their children as well. Admittedly,

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genders have some qualities which must need to teach taught to their adolescents

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children will become a good person in the future.

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female used to stay at homes to nurture their children, women are now in a senior level position in the offices that depicts women are not mere to up bring their infants. To conclude, I think

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parents should raise their children by balance responsibilities.

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, the myth that only females are responsible for nourishing their children proved wrong in the above analysis, which is a good step to stop gender discrimination.