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Your Manager has asked you to do a presentation at the upcoming training session. Write a letter to your manager and say What is the topic of the presentation? What is the benefit of conducting a session on that topic? What are your requirements for conducting this presentation?

#manager #presentation #session #topic #benefit #requirements
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to express my gratitude for giving me the opportunity to share my knowledge about our
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 and projects with freshers. I will be presenting
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the current flow of our risk number cycle and ongoing projects. I will make sure to make
this
 presentation more interactive by having a questionnaire post each topic. In
this
 way, our new colleagues will be able to learn more. I believe we have conducted technical sessions for new joiners recently but those sessions will be helpful in honing technical skills only. Giving them insights
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 our entire flow and projects will help them to understand the functional aspects of our work. I am preparing my presentation by keeping functional knowledge in my mind. To conduct
this
 session more effectively, I will need a break from my regular work for 3-4 hours in order to prepare for the session. I believe we should record
this
 session using videography so that freshers can access
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 they require. I request you to share your thoughts. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Vicky Chalana

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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