the table below shows us the numbers of visitors to ashdown museum during the year before and the year after i was refurbished. the charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows us the

visitors

to the Ashdown museum with exact numbers. From

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we can see

visitors

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increased

due to

the refurbishment. It is almost twenty thousand

visitors

more than before refurbishment. Below the table, we can see two pie charts which indicate the results of

survey

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the survey

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of

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satisfaction

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the satisfaction

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of the

visitors

. There are five different categories which are very satisfied, satisfied, dissatisfied, very dissatisfied and no response. Those charts illustrate a huge difference between the percentage before and after refurbishment with both. Very satisfied and dissatisfied.Very satisfied

visitors

parsonage has increased

while

dissatisfacted

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dissatisfaction

dissatisfied

visitors

have decreased. If we compare satisfied

visitors

and very dissatisfied it is

same

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as the two facts

before

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we discussed.

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I meant one kind of percentage

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grown which is satisfying and another has gone down. But the difference is

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the same

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. Only one category

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not changed

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is the percentage of

visitors

who did not answer the survey.