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Write about the following topic: “The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers.” What do you think about this opinion? State your point and give reasons and examples to support your answer. Write at least 250 words.

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Modern days, English was
second
Suggestion
a second language
language
 in the countries that require
language’s ability
Suggestion
the language’s ability
 and developing. People need to learn English well to know something about deep and to talk with foreign people. An important role is played by the native teacher. Everyone has to talk and find English information that they need. Obviously the technique is so advanced developing that we have more opportunities. If you want to talk and contact with the native teachers and
person
Suggestion
people
, you need to have just
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
an Internet
. Having
native English teacher
Suggestion
a native English teacher
 is an advantage aspect. They can check you accent and fluently speak own
language
 with for you. The technique is so advanced that we have more opportunities. Internet customers might find new things and information from social. And If you want to buy the cheaper products, you need to know
little English
Suggestion
a little English
. The best way to learn English is active usage of
language
 every day.
On the other hand
, Sometimes you may not need the English native teacher. Especially in any case, you have to try hard and self-study. You need to learn constant
language
 for 1-2 hours.
Also
, all the things you are interested in English. While you are cleaning and walking, you try to listen podcast for English.
Therefore
, you can increase your
language
 skill. In conclusion,
although
 the best way to learn English is to study with the native teachers, I mentioned above it that has many pros and cons. In my view, which I need to try hard and self-study is the best way to learn
language
.
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