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Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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 exploration is one the main issue in our world which has two opposite thinking. Some group believes that it is wastage of resources while the other group consider it as an essential to explore our universe. To start with, I would like to discuss about the former opinion. Nowadays a large amount of resources is used for the purpose of
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 research. To consider in the low economic improvement of certain countries and underdeveloped status of individual in certain countries, the
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 analysis can be considered as a wastage of money as well as manpower.
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 to that, people think that the resources which are used for the inventions about
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 can be
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 used for the overall advancement of the country.
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 the people can get the advantage of improvement of their life standard.
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, some people believe that it is essential to study and understand about the universe where they live. The study about the universe will give more education for the aspirants, who are interested in the
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. To be concluded, I believe that
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 study is needed for the evolution of the particular country, but the individual expansion of the person
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 should be included in the country's developmental plan
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • astronomical costs
  • earthbound issues
  • tangible benefits
  • technological spin-offs
  • innovation
  • long-term investment
  • habitability
  • interplanetary travel
  • sustainable exploration
  • spacefaring nations
  • international collaboration
  • deep space
  • the final frontier
  • cosmic perspective
  • frontiers of science
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