The chart below shows the value of one country's export in various cayegories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage changes in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the export earnings of different sectors of one country between 2015 and 2016.
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Overall
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textile
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the textile
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, the largest drop shown in the values of Gems and Jewellery and the lowest export earning was a textile.
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engineered and petroleum goods accounted for Correct article usage
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the
sales of utmost 58 and 60 billion dollars, respectively, and it became stable at 62 million dollars for both categories in 2016. Correct article usage
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, agriculture items had earned slightly above than
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