Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it's a bad idea and it could be dangerous. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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It is a common belief among scientist humans are not alone in the universe as an evolving intelligent organism, and

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connection with them is possible.

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, another belief is so harmful for the people. I will discuss these viewpoints supporting by other

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forms as like a human - being may be existed, and we should be in researching for sending messages.

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, other planets can host their

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forms which can think, talk, speak in a language. To connect with them gets some positive effects.

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, we can explore some high technology and some cure for

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death full

diseases. The living form can be adapted hard

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situation,

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as less oxygen, water, extreme cold. If we can

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successfully

to reach

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reach

them, we would learn some information which we had had never ever.

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, some researches prove that there is water on Red Planet.

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, they estimate

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can be existed in there. In my opinion, it can be helpful if we can learn how to maintain to live in

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these circumstances

this circumstance

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, even if there has been existed other intelligent organism, sending messages would be the reason of detrimental influences.

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to say, these living forms can be shape-shifter, so they can play act our family, colleagues, even

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the government workers. In the other words, our world can be changed by them in a refuting circle.

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, all these words just like a nightmare. Some estimates which explained by the scientist it has been never appearing, or impossible to harmful connection with other planets, including Mars. In conclusion, some authorities believe that intelligence not only in human-being,

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other

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forms has knowledge and high technology. It is so far from our digital age,

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, in my opinion, we have not been created in

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incredible universe, we have already shared with them in a good way. In the future, like as

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world, the universe would be explored with their residents.

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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it's a bad idea and it could be dangerous. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more? You should write at least 250 words.

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for the holiday Explain that you left your wallet in their house Give them instructions of how to send it back to you

Today many people frequently change their jobs. What problems does it create? How to solve them?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?