Your employer has recently allowed some employees to work remotely from home. You would also like to work from home. Write a letter to the HR manager for permission to work from home for the next six months. In your letter, mention why you are writing explain why you would like to work from home say how this can benefit you and the company

#employer #employees #work #home #hr #manager #permission #six #months #benefit #company

Dear Mr. Vinod, I am writing

this

letter to request you to allow me to

work

from home for the upcoming six months and

then

I will rejoin the office again. Because of

the

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last

week

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accident, I got injured in

leg

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my leg

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which

lead

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me to rest

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bed. If I

will

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travel to the workplace, It can

effect

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affect

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more in my leg and even my doctor has suggested me to take

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rest for

the

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six months for faster recovery,so It would be great if you provide me a

work

from

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home during

this

period which is beneficial to both me and the company. Because of not much travel and remote

work

, I will get well soon and

also

, company's

work

would not get any

burdon

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which help the company to run

smoothely

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smoothly

with

everyday

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task. So, please

this

is my request you

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provide me a

work

from home

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. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Ankit

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coherence cohesion

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Your greeting and closing are appropriate for a formal letter to an HR manager.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

159 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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