Your employer has recently allowed some employees to work remotely from home. You would also like to work from home. Write a letter to the HR manager for permission to work from home for the next six months. In your letter, mention why you are writing explain why you would like to work from home say how this can benefit you and the company

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Dear Mr. Vinod, I am writing

this

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letter to request you to allow me to

work

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from home for the upcoming six months and

then

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I will rejoin the office again. Because of

the

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apply

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last

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week

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week's

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accident, I got injured in

leg

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my leg

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which

lead

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led

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me to rest

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bed. If I

will

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apply

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travel to the workplace, It can

effect

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affect

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more in my leg and even my doctor has suggested me to take

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apply

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rest for

the

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apply

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six months for faster recovery,so It would be great if you provide me a

work

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from

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apply

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home during

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period which is beneficial to both me and the company. Because of not much travel and remote

work

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, I will get well soon and

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, company's

work

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would not get any

burdon

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burden

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which help the company to run

smoothely

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smoothly

with

everyday

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the everyday

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task. So, please

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is my request you

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provide me a

work

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from home

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. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Ankit

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task achievement

You have adequately addressed the task, but providing more specific details or examples about how remote work would benefit both you and the company could strengthen your response.

coherence cohesion

Improve the clarity and logical flow between sentences and paragraphs by using more transitional phrases and connectors.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph contains a single, clear idea to enhance readability and coherence.

task achievement

Your letter successfully covers all parts of the task prompt.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are appropriate for a formal letter to an HR manager.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

159 words

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