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With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the fast and new development of technology, life has become easier. From all the inventions,
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 has become a boon for human. Nowadays, people can do most of the things, sitting at home, using
internet
Suggestion
the internet
. Some people believe that with the rise in the popularity of the
internet
,
newspaper
 will soon become the thing of the past because people can watch and read news online and even newspapers are
also
 available on the
internet
. I completely agree with the statement.
First
 of all, everyone wants to know what is happening in and around the world. To know these things,
newspaper
 is a very good medium. The
newspaper
 provides mostly all of the things which are happening in one's country and in the world, but because of the busy lifestyle, nowadays, people don't have time to read
newspaper
Suggestion
the newspaper
a newspaper
newspapers
. There are many applications available, in which one can read news. People mostly read news on their phones while they are travelling, eating or in their free time. Mostly every press agency has created their own website by seeing the trend of reading online news.Nowadays, older or retired people read newspapers in their leisure time.
Moreover
, pages are made from trees. So, to make pages it is necessary to cut down the trees which is harmful to the environment. To conclude, as the usage and popularity of the
internet
 increases and with the busy and hectic lifestyle of people, watching and reading on the
internet
 is becoming a trend. Though newspapers are essential to provide news,
this
 new change will take over the
newspaper
 and it will become a thing of the past.

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