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Some parents believe that reading books for entertainment is a waste of time for children and they think that their children should read only read serious educational books. What is your opinion?

#parents #books #entertainment #waste #time #children
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It is often argued that students giving more priority to read any comic
book
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 or
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book
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 rather than reading an academic
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 a form of wasting time.
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 reading academic books is good for the
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's education, I firmly believe that reading comic books and/or
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 books improves creativity and imagination which in turn can help a
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 to improve his or her aptitude and reasoning skills.
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 with, academic books only represent the theories and associated assumptions of the respective subject which requires
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 explanation in other ways.
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, a theory in physics might be hard to understand without a practical explanation.
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 limits the students to gain knowledge about a topic from a single source of information which can be a mood killer for someone who has a passion for reading.
On the other hand
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, comic or
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 books are self-explanatory which can be understood without any
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 clarification.
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 enables students to adapt reading at ease.
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, some
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 books or novels consist general knowledge regarding social activities and behaviours which can help a
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 to understand the ways of the society.
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 a
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 should be enabled to have freedom to read whatever he or she believes is easy or necessary. In conclusion, reading
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book
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books
 of any genre can be considered a good habit when compared to other ways of entertainment
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 as mobiles, internet etc. And I think that time spent reading a
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 can never be considered as a waste.
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, the parents should be open minded while allowing their children to receive any information which is written in the form.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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