One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, with the help of
technology medical
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technology, medical
system has immensely grown where it developed latest equipment and medicines which enhance the life span of a human begin.
However
, some people have the contrast view that
such
improvisation
also increase
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also increases
the cost of a
treatment
of old age
patients which
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patients, which
eventually
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the
health
care
managment
the act of managing something
management
of young peoples. Life is a gift of a god and every person
have
Suggestion
has
a desire to live longer. With the efforts of scientist the medical facilities had improved
such
extend that, now it’s possible to increase the
life time
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
of a human by providing proper
treatment
.
For example
, in a olden days people enduring from stomach diseases
is
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are
difficult to treat due to lack of diagnosis,
however
, today with
help
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the help
of
ultra sound
very high frequency sound; used in ultrasonography
ultrasound
machine we can see in-depth
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
the stomach and identify the disease which
subsequently
cure with
best possible
Suggestion
the best possible treatment
treatment
,
consequently
,
Such
advancment
encouragement of the progress or growth or acceptance of something
advancement
keeps the man or women healthy and live longer. Old people are the
presious
characterized by feeling or showing fond affection for
precious
previous
precise
asset of the country which play a vital role in increasing productivity with their experience and
also
proves to be a great mentor for young working professionals. On the other side,
such
advancment
encouragement of the progress or growth or acceptance of something
advancement
advancements
in
health
care system cost more which basically effecting by reducing the budget of
treatment
which spend on
young
Suggestion
the younger
generation.
For instance
,
government issue
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the government issues
government issues
a limited amount of money for
health
care out of which major amount is dumping on keeping old
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
alive while the youth suffers from
health
related
problesm
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
problem
. In conclusion,
although
there is certain drawbacks of latest technology in medical
system but
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system, but
benefits out ways the demerits as old people are the
tresure
accumulated wealth in the form of money or jewels etc.
treasure
treasures
treasurer
of the society If they live long life it
ultimatly
as the end result of a succession or process
ultimately
yield advantages to us.
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