One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, with the help of
technology medical
system has immensely grown where it developed latest equipment and medicines which enhance the life span of a human begin. Accept comma addition
technology, medical
However
, some people have the contrast view that such
improvisation also increase
the cost of a Suggestion
also increases
treatment
of old age patients which
eventually Accept comma addition
patients, which
effect
the have an effect upon
affect
health
care managment
of young peoples.
Life is a gift of a god and every person the act of managing something
management
have
a desire to live longer. With the efforts of scientist the medical facilities had improved Suggestion
has
such
extend that, now it’s possible to increase the life time
of a human by providing proper the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
treatment
. For example
, in a olden days people enduring from stomach diseases is
difficult to treat due to lack of diagnosis, Suggestion
are
however
, today with help
of Suggestion
the help
ultra sound
machine we can see in-depth very high frequency sound; used in ultrasonography
ultrasound
in to
the stomach and identify the disease which expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
subsequently
cure with best possible
Suggestion
the best possible treatment
treatment
, consequently
, Such
advancment
keeps the man or women healthy and live longer. Old people are the encouragement of the progress or growth or acceptance of something
advancement
presious
asset of the country which play a vital role in increasing productivity with their experience and characterized by feeling or showing fond affection for
precious
previous
precise
also
proves to be a great mentor for young working professionals.
On the other side, such
advancment
in encouragement of the progress or growth or acceptance of something
advancement
advancements
health
care system cost more which basically effecting by reducing the budget of treatment
which spend on young
generation. Suggestion
the younger
For instance
, government issue
a limited amount of money for Suggestion
the government issues
government issues
health
care out of which major amount is dumping on keeping old peole
alive while the youth suffers from (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
health
related problesm
.
In conclusion, a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
problem
although
there is certain drawbacks of latest technology in medical system but
benefits out ways the demerits as old people are the Accept comma addition
system, but
tresure
of the society If they live long life it accumulated wealth in the form of money or jewels etc.
treasure
treasures
treasurer
ultimatly
yield advantages to us.as the end result of a succession or process
ultimately
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