some people think that parents should teach the children how to be good members of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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In many countries, parents think that their children need to go to

school

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to get their

education

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and experience. Some people believe that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society,

however

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the

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

think

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thinks

that the children

have learnt

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have learned

this

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in their

education

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. In

this

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essay write

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essay, write

about

advantages

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the advantages

and disadvantages of the people should teach their daughter and son

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First

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of all, some parents think that they need to explain or teach their children by their own because the child listened their than the other.

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older generation

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the older generation

can tell them about the good things and the bad things that

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adult

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adults

need

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needs

to follow them.

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, the Cambodian older find

the good

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the best

better

way

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for their children to follow because they know the

this

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way

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is the best

way

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. Parents will choose

the good

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the best

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education

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education, such

such

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as primary

school

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, high

school

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and university because they can research and ask their friends.

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, people think that the

education

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should teach

younger generation

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younger generations

the younger generation

about how to be a good person in their life. In the addition, some

adult

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listened their teacher than listened their parents. By

this

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way

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, the children think that they can do anything without their parents because they are thinking that they grow up and they can live alone especially the European countries.

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there, the

adult

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can move out when they

was

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were

18 years old so they can learn about their grow. They can think and do want ever they want. In conclusion, the younger generation should listen and learn something from their parents and they can study from their teacher or the other people. In my opinion

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, an adult should

adult

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should learn how to be a good person in the social form the

school

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because their parents were busy with working so they don't have enough time to teach them.

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, if they had time to teach their children, they would teach them too, because the children need the warm shoulder from their parents.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

335 words

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some people think that parents should teach the children how to be good members of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Your opinion

It is impossible to help all the people in the world who are in need, so governments should focus on people from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some think that students must travel to another country in order to learn its language and customs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that no one should do the same job forever, others believe that doing the same job is beneficial for the individual company and society. Discuss both views and give you open your opinion.

The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?