some people think that parents should teach the children how to be good members of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this discuss both these views and give your own opinion
In many countries, parents think that their children need to go to
school
to get their education
and experience. Some people believe that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society, however
the another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
think
that the children Suggestion
thinks
have learnt
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have learned
this
in their education
. In this
essay write
about Accept comma addition
essay, write
advantages
and disadvantages of the people should teach their daughter and sonSuggestion
the advantages
.
Accept space
.
First
of all, some parents think that they need to explain or teach their children by their own because the child listened their than the other. Moreover
, older generation
can tell them about the good things and the bad things that Suggestion
the older generation
adult
Suggestion
adults
need
to follow them. Suggestion
needs
For example
, the Cambodian older find the good
Suggestion
the best
better
way
for their children to follow because they know the this
way
is the best way
. Parents will choose the good
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the best
education
Accept comma addition
education, such
such
as primary school
, high school
and university because they can research and ask their friends.
On the other hand
, people think that the education
should teach younger generation
about how to be a good person in their life. In the addition, some Suggestion
younger generations
the younger generation
adult
listened their teacher than listened their parents. By this
way
, the children think that they can do anything without their parents because they are thinking that they grow up and they can live alone especially the European countries. In
there, the Suggestion
Of
adult
can move out when they was
18 years old so they can learn about their grow. They can think and do want ever they want.
In conclusion, the younger generation should listen and learn something from their parents and they can study from their teacher or the other people. In my opinionSuggestion
were
,
Suggestion
, an adult should
adult
should learn how to be a good person in the social form the school
because their parents were busy with working so they don't have enough time to teach them. However
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