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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are best teachers?

#parents #teachers
Nowdays
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Nowadays
, parents can be the best teacher for every
children
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child
 coming on
this
 earth. I agree with
this
 statement as no learning Institutions can be compared with parents as they are role model of their children since they open their eyes
on
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to
this
 world till they are fully grown up and mature. To start
with when
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with, when
 the
child
 is
born in
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born, parents in this world
born parents in this world
born in this world parent
born in this world parent parent
this
 world parents teaches their
child
 how to speak, eat, drink, live, wear
etcetera
 because they are
mentor
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mentors
mentored
, guide and teacher. The basic school and foundation of every
child
 is
base
Suggestion
based
 on the parents because they are the
first
 school of their
children which
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children, which
 teaches moral activities
,
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,
 moral values, how to respect their elders and
youngers
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
 and many more. Children
spends
Suggestion
spend
 most of their
life
 with their parents and parents
also
 spends half of their
life
 to keep stand their
child
 to own feet.
Moreover
, parents
takes
Suggestion
take
are taken
 care of their
child
 from bad habits and companies. They take responsibility and protect
their
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
them
 from criminals in
this
 world. They
takes
Suggestion
take
have taken
are taking
 all the risks to keep better their
children
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child's
child
 future's
life
 and takes knowledge about the what is best for their
child
. They are more devoted than the teachers in schools
,
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,
colleges and universities. They are more capable of instructing the children and guide them well in upcoming years. I would like to conclude with the statement that parents can be turning point for his
child
 because they tries to teach every step of living
this
life
.

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