Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is sometimes argued that because of the rocketing development of technology, public libraries should be replaced in order not to waste money of the government. In my opinion, I completely disagree with

this

view. On the one hand, the development of technology upgrades the

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information level of human. It is true that computers nowadays help to save many big data for a long time without human support.

Besides

, the sources of information are getting easier and easier for approaching since the

popular

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popularity

of computer. In

this

modern and age, up-to-date reading materials

is accessed

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are accessed

effortlessly so that many people can learn and research directly at home.

However

, there are still many normative values of traditional libraries that computers cannot take over.

First

, in physical libraries it is not difficult to find comfortable and

quite

with little or no activity or no agitation ('quiet' is a nonstandard variant for 'quietly')

quiet

spaces for

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highly

concentrated learning. In fact, since the increasing number of sources of noise surrounding us these days, many people

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chooses

to learn and work

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public libraries.

Secondly

, traditional libraries are the best places for saving and preserving the valuable handwritings from the past.

Moreover

, library users have access to more reliable sources of information. A great deal of online content we have today, meanwhile, is not censored, which possibly leads to a misinformed public. In conclusion, we can take many advantages from the digital age, but the

maintanence

activity involved in maintaining something in good working order

maintenance

of public libraries is essential and worthy to any countries.

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Finally
In a nutshell
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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

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