Some People Think That Shops Should Not Be Allowed To Sell Food Or Drinks That Are Scientifically Proven To Be Bad For People’S Health. Do You Agree Or Disagree?

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An often debated topic is that whether the sales of unhealthy
food
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or drinks should be banned
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in
stores. Personally, I disagree with the idea that junk
food
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are
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is
necessary for interdict, because I believe that there are still some benefits of them. On the one hand, I agree that unhealthy diet can cause various health problems.
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, if people eat too much
food
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which have poor quality and nutrition, they would easily lead to the increase of obesity, diabetes and heart disease.
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these foods often contain too much fat and spices like salt and sugar, consumers are still addicted because of its attractive
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
and flavour.
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, people are increasingly overweight and another consequence is that the government must pay a lot of money for hospital and medical facilities to treat for those
patient
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patients
.
On the other hand
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, I suppose that unhealthy
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or drinks are
also
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important in several ways.
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of all, people nowadays are fond of fast
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and prepared meal rather home-cook
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. They are cheap to buy and
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easy to prepare, so with some people have
busy life
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busy lives
a busy life
, these foods are clearly convenient for them.
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, many companies have been founded by the growth of fast
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for many years. KFC and Coca-cola,
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, have contributed
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a significant part
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of
the economy of America.
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them, we would witness the greatest
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decline
in the world’s economy. In conclusion, while unhealthy
food
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or drinks affect people’s health. I believe that they should not to be banned
at
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in
stores.
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