يوضح الرسم البياني أدناه العدد السنوي للتأجيرات والمبيعات (بأشكال مختلفة) من أفلام من متجر معين بين عامي 2002 و 2011.

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يشير المخطط الشريطي إلى عدد المبيعات والتأجيرات (في شكل مختلف) للفيلم سنويًا من متجر معين من عام 2002 إلى عام 2011. وعمومًا ، يتضح أنه كان هناك انخفاض تدريجي في مبيعات وتأجيرات

VHS

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طوال الوقت ، من ناحية أخرى ارتفعت مبيعات بلو راي باليد بشكل طفيف من عام 2007 إلى عام 2011 ، وفي الوقت نفسه ، ازدادت مبيعات أقراص

DVD

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بشكل كبير ، ولكن في هذه المرحلة بدأت في الانخفاض ببطء. انخفض عدد الإيجارات ، التي كانت في البداية 185000 قطعة في عام 2002 ، بشكل معتدل إلى أقل بقليل من 60000 قطعة في عام 2011. وبالمثل ، انخفضت القطع المباعة من

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بشكل ثابت لتختفي في عام 2006 من 85000 شريحة في عام 2002. بعد عام من اختفاء

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، Blu بدأت مبيعات الأشعة في الارتفاع ببطء إلى ما يزيد على 10000 شريحة فقط في عام 2011. قطعة

DVD

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المباعة ، والتي كانت في البداية أقل قليلاً من 50000 ، ارتفعت بسرعة لتصل إلى القمة بنحو 215000 في عام 2007 ،( in different shape) of movie a year from specific shop from 2002 to 2011. Overall, it is illustrated that there were a gradually fall in

VHS

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sales and rentals all the while,

on the other hand

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blu

a powerful stroke with the fist or a weapon

blew

Blu

ray sales rose slightly from 2007 to 2011.At the same time,

DVD

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sale increased dramatically, but at point it began to plummet slowly. The number of rentals, which was

initially

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185000 piece in 2002

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went down moderately to just under 60000 pieces in 2011.

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likewise

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Likewise

, the pieces sold

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declined steadily to

disappeared

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disappear

in 2006 from 85000 slices in 2002. A year after

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disappeared, Blu ray sales began to

appeared

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appear

rose

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rise

slowly to only over 10000 slices in 2011. The sold piece of

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DVD

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the DVD

, which made up

initially

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a little under 50000, went up rapidly to reach the top by approximately 215000 in 2007, but

this

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trend didn't

last

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along and began

worsen

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to worsen

again only a year later to became 180000 prices in 2011.

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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