Walking is known to be beneficial for health and yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to tackle this problem?

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Walking is great exercise and truly it is very

benifical

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

for health.Walking in morning

time increase

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time, increase

stamina power

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stamina, power

and It is highly recommended to walk to boost

immunie

relating to the condition of immunity

immune

system of the body.Many medical person

beliefs walking

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beliefs, walking

can release

stess

the relative prominence of a syllable or musical note (especially with regard to stress or pitch)

stress

sites

of our daily life. Now in

this

stressful life, many of us forget to walk due to our busy schedule. Work pressure is increasing gradually and its quite hard to get

time

for exercise. We are finding ways for less

hardwork

Suggestion

hard work

and trying to ease our energy consumption for Eg, we are taking Car/Motorcycle to reach at our workplace and spending

time

in office as it is, same way back to home and in weekend

time

just to relax at home.In ancient times people prefer to walk more and more and doing

hardwork

Suggestion

hard work

for

thier

of them or themselves

their

bread and butter. In a conclusion,

refers to the speaker or writer

just want to say we need to do more physical activities to keep

ourself

Suggestion

our self

fit.If is hard to get

time

for the gym we can bring

treadmill

Suggestion

the treadmill

at home and set

time

for walking/running

initially

5mnts is enough and we can increase the

time

as well as speed

Accept space

We can take public transport to go for offices and try to avoid own transportation

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it can help us for

little exercise

Suggestion

a little exercise

and we feel fresh.

Also we

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Also, we

need to encourage our own family members

for

Suggestion

excercise

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

and physical activities.

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Walking is known to be beneficial for health and yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to tackle this problem?

Fully explain your ideas

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More and more wild animals are on the vergeof extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this peoblem?

Some people think that a person improves intellectual skills better when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.

In many countries, children are engaged paid in some kind of paid work. some people regard this as completely wrong. while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. discuss both these views and give your opinion.