Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
By the time being, the tendency of urban sprawl has been growing,
therefore
more and more citizens of megalopolises weigh positive and negative sides of influence on health
. I can partially agree, what
bad impact outweighs good.
Because of, big cities have a lot of transport Suggestion
what's
such
as public and private, level of pollution there higher than in villages that lead to problems with lung. However
, last
scientist researches show almost equally
air pollution Suggestion
equal
everywhere even
in a forest. Accept comma addition
everywhere, even
Moreover
, almost all vehicles noisy that lead
to problems with listening. Suggestion
leads
Furthermore
, megalopolises crowded that means people stay close to each other many time that lead to faster spread diseases. Thus
, on a surface citizen of big cities more vulnerable to a problem with health
.
However
, if look deeply we could see more hospital and more opportunities for protecting health
. Because of, citizens of megalopolises could take faster medical help and each weekend are going to a forest on camping, bad influence big cities on health
will become equally
with people from villages. Suggestion
equal
Moreover
, today almost all small towns are located near a highway that means, perhaps, less noisy, but similar with
Suggestion
to
cities
air and other pollutions. Suggestion
city
city's
cities'
However
, such
villages not always have
good medical insurance, which sometimes more dangerous. Suggestion
don't always have
Consequently
, today’s influence on health
almost equal everywhere.
To sum up, in my opinion, no matter where you are living pollutions and super-viruses are findings us everywhere; however
, in big cities people have more chances for
heal than in villages. Suggestion
to
Thus
, I cannot completely agree with the topic statement.Submitted by ilua.cavchuk on
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