The news media have become more influential in people’s lives, some people think it’s a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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By the time being,
news
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the news
is surrounding us everywhere and permanently by the internet or newspaper, or the TV,
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people more times are thinking about the pros and cons it’s. Overall, the news media
has
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have
a positive role in an alert;
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, all of
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is ruined through many negatives.
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, I totally agree with the opinion about
news
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the news
has
negatives
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negative
development
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developed
developing
. Even though, the news coverage of the situation around the world, aware of new dangerous diseases or other things that we must know, all these
information
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are filtered
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is filtered
before represent us.
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, we are watching a lot of time exaggerating or perverting
information
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that
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a digestible substance used to give color to food
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by actors or
rumor
gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth
rumour
for the benefit of the TV channel owners or journalists.
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, different channels are representing the same
information
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from different corners or views that lead to confusion.
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, the news today has a lot of trash
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as
lives
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life
celebrities or even who and what
wear
we are
we're
on events that are hiding time-to-time important
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in consequences we know about less important things and almost in
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the dark
about important.
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, the news today
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are used
as a way to firing enmity between people or countries, or demoralizing opponents in the
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elections
election
electorate
or a business wars that are working because of elderly people still believe all that they hear on the news. In conclusion, I am convinced we must carefully listen to the news and
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consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
or check
in
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with
other sources all these
information
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to prevent spread not true
information
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or giving in panic through exaggerating the dangers. Inasmuch as, we have many negative influences in spread of news we should diminish their impact on our life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pervasive
  • public opinion
  • shape perceptions
  • sensationalism
  • misinformation
  • public mistrust
  • manipulation
  • fostering division
  • bias
  • selective portrayal
  • echo chamber effect
  • raising awareness
  • watchdog
  • informed discourse
  • media literacy
  • critical thinking skills
  • credible
  • biased
  • promote unity
  • fostering empathy
  • diverse perspectives
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