the graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the main features and make comparison where relevant.

the graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The waste produced by company A was the most, with around 12
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waste
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in 2000. The total trend
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decreased noticeably and reached about 8
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in 2015.
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drop trend was
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seen in
company
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B, the figure climbed to 10
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by 2005, but after
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it plumbed dramatically
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then
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reached 3
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in 2015. There was an opposite line of waste in
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which is
company
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C, with the figure were 4
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which was the lowest in 2000. But it has
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substantially rose in 15 years
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reached 10
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and became the highest one in 2015.

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