the charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries
The pie charts give information about how the world’s
water
is distributed, whereas
the bar chart illustrates the percentage of water
used in agriculture, domestic use and industry in three countries (Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada). Overall
, salt water
makes up an overwhelming majority of the world’s water
. Fresh water
is made up of mainly
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main
water
from ice and glaciers. While
most water
in Egypt and Saudi Arabia is used for agriculture, in Canada it is predominantly used for industry. The pie charts show that 97% of global water
is salt water
compared to a mere 3% which is fresh water
. Water
from ice and glaciers accounts for 79% of all fresh
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freshwater
water
as opposed to ground
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groundwater
water
and surface water
(20% and 1% respectively). The pie charts show that 97% of global water
is salt water
compared to a mere 3% which is fresh water
. Water
from ice and glaciers accounts for 79% of all fresh
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freshwater
water
as opposed to ground
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groundwater
water
and surface water
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