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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Hotel Manager, I am a participant who just attended a meeting in "china" hall. My name is Santy, and I have just realized that I left some extremely important
papers
 of mine on a table which is in the
third
 row from the front part,
in
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 the left side. Those
papers
 are in a transparent yellow bag map, with pink
zipppers
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zippers
zipper
. At the head on the
map
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 it is written London Tower Bridge.
Furthermore
insidhe
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inside
map
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the map
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 there are those
papers
, along with an expensive shiny black pen. Those
papers
 are my finance report, which will be used in my day presentation
beforeore
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before
before ore
 all boards of
commissioner
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.
Therefore
, I require a favour of you to get the
papers
 and please keep them in the front office.
Subsequently
, I will return to the hotel, to take my
papers
. I do apologize for bothering you. Best regards SANTY
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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