Today, newspapers and televisions are giving detailed descriptions on crimes. Some people believe such a practice will cause bad consequences and thus media should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The news is important in a

part

of the alert throughout the time, they have been broadening via new technologies, and had changed in a

part

of the coverage.

Therefore

crime

scenes always surround and get much detail.

Thus

, more and more people think it is necessary to diminish some

part

of the news for evading bad aftermaths. Overall, respectively what shows on the TV, I completely agree with cutting some description of the crimes.

Nevertheless

, some the news help to alert people about new criminals, which lead to more protecting life.

For example

police

officers have a practice of the identify suspects via a photo robot or find out witnesses of the

crime

scene that sometimes helps to faster arrests of killers or other delinquents.

Hence

, some

part

of news an inevitably needs, and help decrease the level of

crime

However

crime

scenes are specific theme not for everybody, especially in bloody

part

therefore

such

the news could make a panic. For the instance, when describes a serial killer that could be a neighbourhood or other people near you.

Moreover

, bloody scene for mentally healthy people are disgusted;

however

, for the audience with psychological problems could be guided to activity.

Besides

, some

police

station complains what some pre-date news help perpetrators evade judging.

Thus

, news should coordinate with the

police

and the audience on how to describe

crime

scenes. To sum up, I believe the news has worse aftermaths in their today’s coverage, no matter that kind of a source.

Therefore

, media sources to will be better should adjust describing details and more listen to the audience and the

police

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