Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that we space programmers should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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There is no doubt that the space is still unexplored and unknown. While some argue that these explorations cost more than its advantages, I believe if we want to expand our knowledge beyond our planet. We should continue

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essay will discuss both sides of the argument. On the one hand, many feel the budgets of interplanetary missions,

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as finding water on Mars, are significant.

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is because the technology used in these missions is very expensive.

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, the rover builds to navigate the Mars' surface was around $10 million.

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, we should

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take into account the valuable information it is sending back.

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it might not be useful today, but

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can be used as a basis of many researches in the future. If we had

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mentality a century ago, we would not have landed on the Moon and Mars.

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, the rate at which we are ruining our Earth. We will soon need another one. Keeping

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in mind, the government should double their efforts toward finding new habitable planets.

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, every country should set up divisions for space exploration.

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will create a sense of competition among nations, and will benefit people

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, with increasing population. We are running out of land and fresh water.

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, spending on these programs is justified. To conclude, I think

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is the right time to increase spending on space programs. With the amount of data

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collected for future use, and the danger of vanishing drinkable water justifies how essential they are.

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Overall Band Score

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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267 words

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