Some people fail in schools, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in the case?

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Down the centuries, the topic regarding success in

life

grabs our immediate attention because of its universality. On the backdrop of

this

, it is widely believed that people who remained unsuccessful in schools performed well in real

life

and their achievements are

outnumber

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outnumbered

. There are copious reasons behind their accomplishments, and in my perception, these personalities have tremendous ability to utilize their learning and skills than others.

However

, let us dig out an enigma behind their fame. What are the contributing factors for success? We

can not

cannot

deny the importance of

education but

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education, but

to achieve something in

life

practical approach and dedication is a major contributor.

For instance

, studying physics, chemistry or maths help us to understand their practical application in real

life

by finding solutions even after several attempts, is surely one explanation.

Strong

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Strongly

believe

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believes

in self, is another. But one factor has passed all but unnoticed, environmental effect. Theoretically, people who brought up among high achievers usually have big goals and tough competition to beat others. On the

flipside

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flip side

, there is a considerable debate that people with strong academic background with

high

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higher

grades have more potential to succeed due to their addiction

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being number one.

Furthermore

, working hard during school in studies

help

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helps

them to have clear concepts with complete understanding of complex things. In the culmination of the above

discussion we

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discussion, we

may assert that failure in studies can not define failure in

life

. Achievements in

life

depends on both, the education as well as on practical performance.

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Some people fail in schools, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in the case?

Fully explain your ideas

Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

should human adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Discuss both views and give your point.