Tobacco should be treated as illegal like other drugs. Smoking has not a single positive issue but lots of negative effects and therefore, it should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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extent

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an extent

the extent

, tobacco should be treated as illegal like other drugs and smoking has not even single positive effects I completely agree with these statements. Why should I agree with

this

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statement

refers to the speaker or writer

mentioned below with detail. Tobacco and

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having a sunken area

sunken

are one

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of drugs and they can deeply

injured

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injure

our health and

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effect

have an effect upon

affect

our financial status as well.

This

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of drugs are not

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single benefit for human only

they

objective case of they

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deeply and mentally hurts us.

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tobacco and smoking advertisement

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banned

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from

whole world

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the whole world

wide because of

main reason

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the main reason

behind is scientists and research are

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prove

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proving

that tobacco and smoking are killed Human

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I'm

slowly rate as well as

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this

plural of "this"

these

drugs are

main

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the main type

main types

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of invitation of disease. They are one

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of waste of many only spread negative effects in

country

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the country

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very attracts towards

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this drugs

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these drugs

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are injured health. In conclusion, Governments

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have banned

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of drugs. And mainly effects are negativity in people and waste of Money and stay away to

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plural of "this"

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drugs and live a healthy life

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

202 words

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