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these days many children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of a television.some people believe that parents should strictly limit the time that children spend on watching TV as it is harmful to their growth to what extent do you agree

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Children tend to spend most of the hour watching
televison
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
. Nowadays a great amount of
time
 for youngsters is spent on sitting in front of a box of entertainment, which many think that it is harmful to their growth. As I totally agree with the statement above,
this
 essay will discuss how children should manage their
time
 on TV and why.
TV set
Suggestion
The TV set
 can not always be censored or appropriate for children. On many occasions if a parent is not under control, children might get browsed on channels which are still nor appropriate.
Also we
Accept comma addition
Also, we
 can not delete, remove or skip whatever the it is broadcasting. As an example, sometimes on the news they would stream live incidents, attacks which might disturb a child's mind.
therefore it
Accept comma addition
Therefore, it
Therefore it
 is better to restrict their
time
. Watching channels for long hours might
also
 affect children's eyesight and to their brain development. Eyes have really sensitive nerves, and children's ones should not be harmed by at an early age. As they grow tend to lose their eyesight just before completing ten years and get prescribed to use lenses and glasses. Even though the TV set is a great tool of information, it could get harmful if one exceeds the maximum of use.
Therefore it
Accept comma addition
Therefore, it
 is important to
restrictit
Suggestion
restrict it
 the
time
 children spend on television to some extent. In conclusion, even if it is a great information tool, it is important to limit the hours children spend on it to avoid having defects and to grow as a healthy intellect.

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