A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

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Dear Olivia, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. I am very glad that you agree on taking care of my home and pets while I am travelling to see my parents in Brazil, during the

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two weeks. I would like to give you some

quickly

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instructions so I can save your time.

First

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, my cat Anita is very sweet and the only thing I would ask you is

providing

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her

new

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food and changing the water.

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, my dog Goku is very anxious, so

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providing food and water he will need some attention as well. For the house duties, the only things I can ask is taking the trash away and opening the windows. If you need anything please call me on my number +338747849 or on my parent's phone +589348309, I will be

avaliable

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available

24/7 if needed.

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, I am

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giving the landlord contact +56585905 and the pet's assistance +62383728732. Thank you so much in advance for all the help. Yours sincerely. Patricia Recacho.

Thu Mar 19 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

173 words

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