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some people believe that it is a good idea to express their points of view and ideas through social media.however other believe opposite.do you agree of disagree

#people #idea #points #media
it
Suggestion
It
 is certainly true that social media has become a popular platform for everyone to express their ideas.
Although
 some people think that it is a good way to share your ideas
,
Accept space
,
 others hold
a
Suggestion
an
oppisite
being directly across from each other; facing
opposite
 view. I agree that social media is a
truely
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
truly
 beneficial for human by providing them
freedom
Suggestion
the freedom
 to raise
ther
of them or themselves
their
her
the
 voice
.
Accept space
.
 To commence with
,
Accept space
,
there are some reasons to consider as a wise idea because it provides freedom to reach to the
maximun
the greatest or most complete or best possible
maximum
 number of people.Nowadays
,
Accept space
,
everyone is active on social media and it has great influence on people's thoughts. In other words
,
Accept space
,
a person with
help
Suggestion
the help
 of social media can reach to the authorities, against or in favour of any issue because social media act as a bridge between government and local people.
For instance
, nobody can forget
jassica
 murder case in
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
 in which people came forward
on
Suggestion
with
 social media and mounted pressure on authorities for the justice.
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