parents usually mothers stay at home to look after their family. people believe they should receive a salary from the government for that. do you agree or disagree?

The bar
grapgh
a visual representation of the relations between certain quantities plotted with reference to a set of axes
graph
indicates how much money for leisure activities, namely
televison
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
, publishing, music, video and cinema,..
that
Suggestion
That
varies in three countries between 1995 and 2000. Overall, the number of money for
entertanment
an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention
entertainment
incresases
become bigger or greater in amount
increases
slightly over five-year period. The US spent the most money and had a
dramatical
suitable to or characteristic of drama
dramatic
growth from1995 to 2000. Followed by European countries and Asia respectively grew steadily. In 1995, at the lowest point, Asia rose from $67 billion to $110 dollars, compared to 2000. Europe had a slight improvement more $34 dollars. By the 2000, the United States reached peaks of 257 billion dollars that much
times
Suggestion
time
as highly as the others. In
constrast
the opposition or dissimilarity of things that are compared
contrast
, in Asia and
Europea
the 2nd smallest continent (actually a vast peninsula of Eurasia); the British use 'Europe' to refer to all of the continent except the British Isles
Europe
, there were only 110 and 131 billion dollars. It is clear that television and publishing are chosen more in all three countries which covered almost two-
third
for any other platforms. Music, video and cinema
occuipied
held or filled or in use
occupied
little portion for everyone’s choice.
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