Some people think that sports involving violence such as boxing and martial arts should be banned from TV as well as from international sports competition.what is your opinion ?

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people that rough

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boxing and martial arts should be banned from Television and international sporting events.

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, I believe that

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sporting activities are for fun and recreation and should be conducted under strict supervision and guidelines. With regards to sporting events, which involve aggression and

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of energy are conducted to imbibe the characteristics of initiatives, leadership and self-confidence.

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nature of the game,

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people get hurt in

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why there are international norms and

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under which these types of

sports

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are conducted.

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, apart from fun and joy, participation in

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are matter of choice. These

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can not be banned because an element of danger is involved,

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otherwise

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it would be construed against the fundamental rights of individuals.

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, it cannot be denied that many

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times adults copy violent acts from

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games and Television

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to implement in real life and get injured.

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years ago many children imitated the act of their favorite action character and harmed themselves. At

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had to intervene to off-air the program.

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mind is raw and receptive to all

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they watch or practice, here it

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very imperative on the part of parents and authorities to increase

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awareness about the risk involved and

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to be adopted.

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sporting activities are good for the

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personality development of individuals ,

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these activities should be performed under the guidance and supervision of

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coach

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to avoid any mishappening.