Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that successful persons from
sprots
produce buds, branches, or germinate
sprouts
sports
spirits
are
earing
earn on some commercial or business transaction; earn as salary or wages
earning
eating
earn
a huge amount than in any other industry persons. While others think that there are a quite large number of people are getting massive funds for their
resppective
considered individually
respective
professions. In my view, It's completely unfair that only famous sports personalities earning more money. On the one hand, the predominant reason to get the massive amount for the sports
authlets
a person trained to compete in sports
athletes
outlets
is
beacause
for the reason that; on account of
because
of the demand and interest for the public. There is a huge public demand for the sports like cricket, football, and badminton from all over the world. Because of that interest and popularity are
advantage
Suggestion
advantageous
to earn more money to the famous sportsmen.
In addition
to, there was a great deal of endorsement to the successful cricketers and other champions. A large number of companies would like to
adverize
call attention to
advertise
their products into market with the help of
this
sports platform
personalities
Suggestion
personality
so that they could earn more profits.
On the other hand
, there are other professions where people are getting paid well and
offcourse
Suggestion
of course
off course
more than the sports celebrities.
For instance
, consider the world large tech
gaint
any creature of exceptional size
giant
joint
comapnies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
companies'
and their top-level employee's are earning decent salaries.
Also
, for the industries like entertainment, they
too earn
Suggestion
earn
to earn
more money
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
the short period of time. In
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
,
last
year one of the movie
producer
Suggestion
producers
released his movie, which crosses all the previous gross earning movies. To conclude, In my view, not only successful sports persons paid
well but
Accept comma addition
well, but
also
there are other industries
alos
Suggestion
a loss
a los
a low
paid-well for their contribution towards the public entertainment.

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