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Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweighs the disadvantages?

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a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
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of or relating to the study of history
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a number
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a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
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a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
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happening or arising or located within some limits or especially surface
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To
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the government
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