Some people say that best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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, let’s break down the issue, advocates for increasing the number of sport venues have said that Linking Words
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measure seems easy to do and logical, it isn’t always the only path to improve health care. Some critics say that it is a waste of money to so. Their reason is, Linking Words
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place, and still, stay in their houses and do no exercises at all. The same critics Linking Words
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argued that it is better to make the public to understand the importances of exercising and keeping their body healthy.
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