The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
The graph shows the
number
of trips made by resident
and Fix the agreement mistake
residents
outlander
into the Fix the agreement mistake
outlanders
center
of the city over ten years. Change the spelling
centre
overall
, it can be seen that the general trends
before the parking meters Fix the agreement mistake
trend
introduced
Add a missing verb
were introduced
was
the Change the verb form
were
number
of travel which
made by Correct pronoun usage
apply
resident
above 9000 per day and after it not more than 5000 per day.
In the first four years, the trips per day for Fix the agreement mistake
residents
resident
were considerably higher than Fix the agreement mistake
residents
outlander
. in the first year, the average Change preposition
for outlander
number
of trips for the people who lives
out Change the verb form
live
the
city was half the Change preposition
of the
number
of resident
.Add an article
the resident
a resident
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