The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
The graph shows the
number
of trips made by
resident
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residents
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and
outlander
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outlanders
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into the
center
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of the city over ten years.
overall
, it can be seen that the general
trends
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before the parking meters
introduced
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was
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the
number
of travel
which
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made by
resident
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residents
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above 9000 per day and after it not more than 5000 per day. In the first four years, the trips per day for
resident
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residents
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were considerably higher than
outlander
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. in the first year, the average
number
of trips for the people who
lives
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out
the
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city was half the
number
of
resident
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the resident
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, resident with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • residents
  • non-residents
  • urban planning
  • traffic management
  • regulate
  • measures
  • impact
  • increase
  • decrease
  • compare
  • explore
  • evaluate
  • potential
  • journey
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