What are the major problem in the city an how can the government deal with it
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transport
infrastructure is underdeveloped. So far, Ho Chi Minh Correct article usage
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As a result
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However
, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. Linking Words
First,
they need to expand roads, build more bridges and propaganda to raise Linking Words
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traffic
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Besides
, politicians have the power to ban vehicles from Linking Words
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for example
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