What are the major problem in the city an how can the government deal with it

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An increasing number of
people
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are moving to large metropolises in the hope of a better future.
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,
city
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life
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brings many difficulties for
people
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. Some arduous in the
city
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include
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traffic
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congestion
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and high
cost
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of living. In my opinion, governments could do much more to improve
city
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life
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for the
inhabitant
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.
Traffic
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congestion
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is a big difficulty in the
city
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. Because the
city
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is very densely populated.
According to
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the data of the Hanoi Department of
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, up to now, there have been about 5 million motorbikes and 535 thousand cars in Hanoi.
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metric has shown,
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number of
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moving is very crowded, leading to
traffic
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bumper to bumper.
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, a serious problem is that not every citizen is conscious of obeying
traffic
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laws. When participating in
traffic
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, some
people
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go through a red light, speeding, leading to very serious accidents and overcrowding in the streets.
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,
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transport
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infrastructure is underdeveloped. So far, Ho Chi Minh
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City
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transport
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infrastructure only meets about 30% of the
city
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's
transport
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development plan. Infrastructure, roads,
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bridges are narrow and degraded. The construction process was slow and stagnant.
Consequence
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is many
people
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have to struggle with
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transportation jams, who usually face
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being late
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their office.
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,
people
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in the
city
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always grapple with bad
traffic
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. There is no denying that the
cost
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of living in big cities is much higher than in the countryside. The impact of
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can lead to the high
cost
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of public services
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as health services, postal services, and education. It will be difficult for the poor and workers to live in big cities with a low minimum wage. They seem to struggle with the rapid changes in the price of basic necessities.
As a result
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, many workers have to work day and night but still cannot afford for their children to go to school and pay all kinds of living expenses in the family.
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, some
people
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have no rent and they have to stay under bridges or even
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slums in the
city
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. So expensive costs make the
life
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of the
poorer
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more difficult than the
richer
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rich
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, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems.
First,
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they need to expand roads, build more bridges and propaganda to raise
people
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's awareness when participating in
traffic
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.
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, politicians have the power to ban vehicles from
city
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centres and promote the use of cleaner public
transport
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, which would help to reduce both air pollution and
traffic
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congestion
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.
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, they could invest money in the building of affordable or social housing to reduce the
cost
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of living. In London,
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, the introduction of a
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charge for drivers has helped to curb the
traffic
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problem. Another way, politicians can develop provincial towns and rural areas,
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moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressure on major cities.
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, there are many difficulties in the
city
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that
people
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face. Governments should certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of
life
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for all
city
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residents
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